Breaking the HabitThis is a featured page

Author: chris_90
Rating: Still unsure.... really... I don't want to rate it...


For better understanding, read ,,Being a coward".


It was no need to go to Naruto's. Although he wasn't a coward anymore, he still had his reserves. It was no need to rush. Their relationship was based on sex and ignoring each other the rest of the time. So, now it were two weeks since he did it with Naruto. They always did it after a mission. It was like celebrating.Well, Naruto was always a pain in the ass. Literally. But he always made Sasuke need him. Their approach was always so slow and tender. It annoyed him. Now, he had no choice but to fall deeper into Naruto's trap. To give away the last piece of his heart. To drown himself into Naruto's caresses. But he was sure of one thing. If Naruto would've been wilder, he wouldn't lose his heart so easily, would he? He would be able to resist. But Narto couldn't be that way, could he? He was so tender and sweet and always caring about him. Well, not to the extent of sparing his sore ass, but he always made him come. Hard. By now, he knew all of Naruto's weak points. Like the back of his ear, or his nipples, or.... Oh, there were so many.... He seamed to be weak at every one of Sasuke's touches. But it would be different if Naruto wouldn't be so tender....... He was confident that he would be able to keep his heart if Naruto were something like a wild lover. He was sure that if he'd make a bet, he'd win. Not like last time. It would be a sure victory.

He looked outside through the window. It was raining heavily. A flash of lightning revealed someone approaching his house. It was a very determined person because he had no umbrella. It was dangerous. Maybe a criminal..... Well, he wasn't scared. He decided that opening the door when the stranger would reach it would be the best option. So he did that. But what...... It was only Naruto. Well, he seemed to have a sixth sense, which told him that Sasuke was around. Maybe two weeks were too much for him, after all. But the next thing he saw scared him.

Although a very wet Naruto was staring at him, he couldn't believe his eyes. It was like a beast. His golden hair was all messed up. His lips were white from biting. He could see the marks. But what hypnotised him were those eyes. Usually blue and big, they were deep red now. Staring at him. He knew he was indecent, but it was because he arrived home soaking wet, took a bath and didn't have time to put on too much before Naruto arrived. He had only the bath towel around his hips. He saw Naruto smiling at him, but it was like a warning. That certainly broke the habit. Now, it was time to test out his strength.

<<You didn't even announce me you returned, hum, Sasuke?>> That husky voice made him shiver. It was so unforgiving. It made him feel ashamed.
Sasuke took a step back while Naruto progressed.
<<You always run away from me. I'm tired of it, do you hear me? From now on, I'll give you what you deserve.>>
What did he deserve? Naruto was nuts. A beast because of the nine tailed fox inside of him. Maybe he'll be killed. Oh, this was getting out of hand.

Before he realised it, Naruto was inside, locking the front door. No escape, huh? Fine then..........Oh, no, his back was against the wall. Literally. He took a quick look back, but he had nowhere to go. Well, then....... huh...... That evil smile was two inches before him. When did he get that close?
<<You're mine........>> It was not a question. It was a declaration from Naruto. He didn't know that Naruto was so possessive.

He opened his mouth to reply, but he didn't have time. Naruto's fingers were in his hair, preventing any movement. His mouth was captured by Naruto. But it was different. He wasn't asking. He was demanding. His tongue assaulted Sasuke's. It was a battle. A hot one. It was moist, as he felt himself being sucked into Naruto's mouth. Warmth was all around him. He felt like melting. To prevent that, he took a hold of Naruto's shoulders. He didn't realise when he closed his eyes. When he opened them, he could see Naruto gazing at him. So, he was determined. Oh......
another one. Naruto bit his tongue. Then he sucked it. Caressing it with his own. He decided it was too good for comfort. He tried to get his ass as far away as he could. He didn't want Naruto to know he got erect only from that. As if he could. He wasn't even able to break the kiss.

And, the worst thing was that now Naruto's hands were on his ass. He was cupping his buttocks. Molding them. Oh. Now, he was pressed against Naruto. And he had a big response, too. He saw the smile from Naruto's eyes. His lover was moving his hips to get him even more aroused. Now, they were touching each other completely. His naked chest was pressed against the clothed one, the coldness of the wet outfit making his nipples hard. But he wasn't cold. Not at all.

Oh....... now he was completely naked. The towel was ripped off. He started to feel uncomfortable. It had never happened to him to be the only one naked. And he didn't like the sensation those wet clothes gave to his erection. He wanted to pull back. As if he could. Naruto forced him to press against his body completely. He was still kissing him, but, in the same time, he parted his buttocks. No, not that...... He wasn't ready. Not yet. He started pleading with his eyes, but he only met a cold gaze. He broke the kiss. He was scared. Naruto knew how painful it was................
And now, he intended to.......... He prepared himself to yell. He didn't care........ but he won't let it happen.

Well, Naruto didn't lose any time. He put a finger inside. But Sasuke was not wet, so he thought of screaming. Instead of that, he bit the shoulder that was before his eyes. Hard. He could feel Naruto moaning, but nothing else. The finger was still there, inside him. Moving around his walls, claiming him.The tightness started to disappear. He started to feel good. Soon, he was ready for another one. And Naruto didn't lose the opportunity. Those two fingers were stretching him, making scissors like movements, opening him. It was more than he could handle. And when Naruto started to move beside him, touching his erection with those wet clothes, it made him to almost come. But he couldn't do that...... not in the hallway.

<<Oh, my......... are you a pervert, Sasuke.................?>> he felt Naruto fingering him, moving around him, and now he was whispering. Oh....... that was too much...
It was driving him crazy. If this were to continue...................
<<You'll come soon..... my love..... come now........... for me...............>>
That was it. How could he read his mind? He was starting to become paranoic.
<<But........I'll............ make you..... d...... dir...... dirty.>> that last word was pointing out his arousal. It was like a confession. He felt Naruto laugh.
<<Go ahead.................. I want you to do that..... Now..... come for me... Give it to me.......... your pleasure.>> It wasn't fair. Who said he had to be the one who was always taken? And he couldn't handle it anymore. He was going to do it.

What the hell? Naruto was kissing him. He was doing that on top of everything. Now, he was sure he won't be able to restrain himself. His scream was sucked by that greedy mouth while he tightened himself around those fingers. Well, it was over now. He was free and exhausted. But, as always, Naruto took such a good care of him. A little corner of his mind wondered if he would be able to do that too. Well, maybe next time. He considered it over....... Naruto demonstrated his point. It was time to go to bed. They'll continue from there.

<<Let's go........... Naruto?>> Naruto was still watching him. He felt himself blushing. What if he was disgusted with him? What will he do?
<<No. You're so beautiful.................. I want you here.............>>
<<But, I've already done it... Uh...... are you talking about that?>>
<<Yeah... And I won't take a NO as an answer.>>
With that, he was pulled to the wall. Again. This time facing it directly. He had no time to prepare himself. Naruto just pulled his cock out of his underwear and entered him. Fully. It made him skip a heart beat. He yelled. He didn't care if he was heard, although the storm covered it. He sobbed for a long time. He could feel Naruto's regret as he was kissing his neck. That was his weak spot. And he deliberately did that. That pervert............ Naruto......... He felt himself loosening up.

And probably Naruto did that too because he started to move. Well, he had an interesting feeling. He was with his back at Naruto, feeling the wetness behind him. But it didn't bother him. That was still Naruto. He felt the slow motions......... felt himself tight around the hard intruder....... Ah... now he found his spot....... He always did it........ He was hitting it unmercifully. He lost himself in that familiar sensation. Naruto pumping into him............ Again, he wondered how Naruto would feel like. That silly thought. It was enough to feel the hardness of his shaft entering him, then slowly pulling back.

That was strange. He felt Naruto suddenly fastening the rhythm. It was as if he couldn't wait. Well, he'll help. He started milking him. He wanted Naruto to come inside of him. He loved that sensation.
<<You're a naughty boy........>> Naruto's voice whispered into his ear. He couldn't help but smile. But his smile faded away as he felt Naruto's hand between his legs.
<<Not now............. I can't so soon..... Please.......... let go....>> he begged.
<<No........ We'll do it together.>> Naruto said as he started stroking him, building up his erection. He knew him too well....... Teasing the tip of it, then cupping his balls, moving his hot fingers over his shaft................... It was so good.....
<< What were you saying?>> the whisper turned him on even more as it was using the voice of a Naruto on the verge of coming. That sexy voice was filling his ears, while his hardness filled him with strange sensations.

They watched together the hand that was touching him. He wondered if Naruto was as pleased as him. He was, judging by his actions. He got more eager, deepening all his thrusts. At that, Sasuke shouted:
<<I'll do it.................................. Now................>>
<<OK. Let'...... do........ i.......... it........ to........... to......... together.>>
The voice was the one that filled any remaining resistance as they came together. Now, he got Naruto's hand dirty too......... They moved themselves along the hallway, reaching the shower. After a quick one, they were now in bed. Naruto was hugging him after he made him promise not to run away anymore.

Well, he lost the bet again. A wild Naruto was even more dangerous. He took away his heart completely. But, he was sure of one thing. Although Naruto didn't say it since their first time, he loved him too. His actions were the proof. He smiled while he curled himself against Naruto like a cat against his master. The last thing he heard before falling asleep was Naruto calling his name.


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chris_90 .... thanks 0 Apr 24 2009, 4:33 AM EDT by chris_90
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Uh... thank you for posting a thread. But I am sorry to disappoint you... actually I am a girl. Anyway, I am always pleased when anyone appreciates my writing. Hehehe.... that is why I post it. Thanks again.
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Crazykittylover wow 0 Dec 6 2008, 1:58 AM EST by Crazykittylover
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you are a most gifted writer ans this work astounds me. its passion and hits of tenderness are fastanting and you are writer i love to hire, keep the work up. ^_^
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reychop Wow... 0 Oct 26 2008, 10:42 PM EDT by reychop
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This just revived my passion for them... The atmosphere looks so dark and mysterious yet I can feel tenderness within it... Being a coward is good too. I hope you'll write more of this... I like how you started it. Though Sasuke and Naruto were a bit out of character, Sasuke's insecurity and naruto's tender yet wild attitude somehow reached out to an inner me.. I don't know how to explain it, but it's different than just sex and smut. It has an underlying plot that wasn't revealed to the public...

The fact that it only focuses on the two of them produces a lot of questions which could create a web of mystery within the reader's mind. Nice work!!! Short yet filled with drama and romance!!!
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